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SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
Posts 279
North Carolina

0 posted 2008-12-28 12:37 PM


She's an old time classic
Writing on the walls of time
Bleeding but it never shows
She's the good gone tragic
Tramples all that's in her path
Spitting lies that you will follow
She's an edge so sharp
Cutting deep into the flesh
Drinking blood like it was wine
She's your broken heart
Longing for a friend to trust
Holding all the hurt inside
She's an old time classic
Waiting for all this to end
So she can die and start again
She's the good gone tragic
A lie you've always told yourself
To place the blame on someone else

December 28 2008
Emily Shives


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since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
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1 posted 2009-01-01 10:00 PM


Amazingly we all manage to survive this, and I am old enough to tell you I did many a time

Nice job!

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
Posts 284
U.S , Ca
2 posted 2011-12-19 03:46 AM


i liked the shes a good gone tragic part

yolilitzli

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