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Dark Poetry #5

how do you feel today

norunnin
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since 2008-10-16

Posts 71

0 posted 2008-12-30 06:30 PM

how do you feel today
they say
and i cant say
cause i didnt feel anything today

JenniferMaxwell

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since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

1 posted 2008-12-31 10:03 AM

Your poems are good the way they are, short and to the point, but it would intersting to see you add to them. For instance in this one, maybe flesh it out with images of things you couldn't feel, or the reasons why.

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

2 posted 2011-12-19 03:42 AM

or the feeling of not feeling anything

yolilitzli

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