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Dark Poetry #5
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Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23
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0 posted 2009-07-07 01:22 AM


one day ill tell you how deep my sadness lies
One day ill show you how deep by pain resides
Inside way down inside
Slowly becoming to much to push down
To much To much To much
Sing me a song Sing me to sleep
Pushing it all down deeper and deeper
Sing me into slumber
Sleeping deeper
Inside me where my soul lies open
Pain seeps through and runs all on
Over the floor of my heart
Staining my veins
I bleed red
Pushing myself deeper and deeper
As you sing to me softly
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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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1 posted 2009-08-10 07:47 AM

Sad and beautiful. Moving.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·
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since 2008-12-03
Posts 186
Toronto, Canada
2 posted 2009-08-10 01:14 PM

a very sad write.
Well done with the images you wanted to across in this piece.
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