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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut

0 posted 2009-06-15 07:06 PM



Trust filled eyes I stand
I stare at the waste filled land
I walk it to fill my hearts desires
But only to fall with waves of fires

I try like they say to do when its rough
But the truth is I don’t believe I’m that tough
I’ve fallen over and over I’m tired of walking on

Others walk along side me in that waste land
There is no rest only to walk and run.
I’ve had enough but Can’t give up..

I put my life on that line.
My fate is my decision
And I give it all up
For you to keep going.

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

© Copyright 2009 Mariah Paige - All Rights Reserved
Def-init
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since 2008-12-03
Posts 186
Toronto, Canada
1 posted 2009-06-18 03:57 PM


Hey Midnight. Been awhile since I have read a poem from you. I like the meaning you have put into this piece. Kinda seems sad.

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
2 posted 2011-05-11 11:56 PM


well thankss


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