Dark Poetry #5 |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Ever cringing Thoughts bleed fear Panic fringing Dark's despair Consecrating Tears to blind Explicating A tormented mind Forever chronic Symptoms instill Depressive catatonic Exacting will Inspired-8 |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Excellently written You can almost feel the dark despair In the provocative write, Well penned Annie |
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prize Member
since 2008-11-21
Posts 116 |
This is a terrific poem. I love the way it flows and the words you use...reading it out loud is similar to hearing music and the imagery is incredible. Very well done. Thanks for sharing and I hope to read more. P |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I like the words you used. It really shows the darkness through very well, enjoyed. -GC |
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Desirer4New Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art |
flows very nicely...enjoyed |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Hmm, I don't know what to make of this poem. I get the feeling of a dark presence in this poem. Words placed perfectly for such a short poem. Was a good read for sure thou. |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
thank you all for reading and commenting: ) peace vic |
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