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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
I'll be your greatest fear And haunt the memories of your past You won't acknowledge my presence I'll hide within the agony Your heart has begged to flee Too many times a failure Has become your only savior You want a name to call on A page to write on Another care to bleed on Breaking down the walls That have been holding you together Like stitches in the flesh Salt poured in the wound Burning, screaming Silenced by the lack of existence They don't see you Tempted by your demons Erased by endless feelings That never found their way inside you The skeptic beneath Doubts every answer spoken And if nothing will ever be the same Why is it so hard To admit that you're a waste Bleeding onto a thousand empty pages Emily Shives |
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~~Silver Wolf~~ New Member
since 2009-02-18
Posts 4 |
Wow. That was very powerful. Although I found that in a couple of the lines where they were short kind of jumped the rythem a bit. All in all though it was a very good read. It seems there was alot of emotion put into it. Great work! ~~Silver Wolf~~ |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
A tremendously powerful write Emily. But I would expect nothing less from you. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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