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Dark Poetry #5
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norunnin
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0 posted 2008-12-30 10:51 AM

as my sol floats to the sky
i look at you with a vacant eye
all is lost
i see you say your good byes
then you grin
hold your head
and wait to die
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1 posted 2008-12-30 11:48 AM

A short but very powerful write.
norunnin
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2 posted 2008-12-30 03:54 PM

thannk you. would you elaborate on what makes it good bad or powerful?
ponderthepoetorrsx
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3 posted 2011-12-19 03:40 AM

its beat or rather the way it goes so smoothly

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