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Def-init
Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

0 posted 2008-12-30 04:43 PM

A dark soul is ageless and reviled
Eternal symmetry with God
is in violation of the wild
Consider me a zealot,
the perfect picture for my ballad
Shout it! A dark tone,
like the geographical zone of Sierra Leone
With no home,
where little Sarah's alone with no phone
I was born to be real, my spit... bacterial.
Fearin' yall? Never an Achilles heel,
In my hood, Dumbass's steal!
So I got a gat made from 'Damascus Steel'
laugh at tuff talk from the passenger's in an automobile!
See, I’m a glutton,
a roman with javelins,
leavin’ bodies in oceans
Souls in abyss's,
a righteous act from the back of griffins.
Just cruel like after Stalin had words spoken
Drop bombs like the airmen,
never taken a dive like a WW2 Asian
My soul's on a skillet looking like bacon,
the perfect diction
Go underground and start a nation that mirrors Zion.
Hunting poets like Natives with the Bison,
Cut you down and get twice as much at the auction
I see all vermin,
like terrorist Arabs wearing turbans
I'm a titan with a spine larger than any Spartan
Leave ya with hands around the neck that tighten.
Beefin' at me will take its toll, man.
So back track and save your token
My skin's flame retardant,
Like hood-scum at night,
I laugh at these Hoodlums fright
My hex is real; the appeal is tantric,
straight fantastic
Where would you seek a victim?
A fan asked it!
The thickest thicket in Harlem
is where I'm most fearsome!
For fun I rhyme some...
over the music of the spheres
My vocals are disturbed;
No surprise they please ears
I'm on a power trip,
Captain of a whaling ship
My soul's a hollow point tip...damn
I ain't heavenly divine I use verbal Holograms
I use custom phrases in assorted arrangements
In fact the only perceptual experience left
Is my own cerebral death...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2009-01-01 09:59 PM

I really enjoyed your write, and felt that if you did this in "pieces" it would make a great rap.

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

2 posted 2009-01-01 10:26 PM

Interesting. I don't believe I've read anything by you before. Are you a rapper?

Life's short. Think hard!
Me!

JenniferMaxwell

Member Elite

since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

3 posted 2009-01-01 11:00 PM

Excellent use of language and vocabulary in a whirlwind of random thoughts and images. Enjoyed the read very much!

Def-init
Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

4 posted 2009-01-06 10:14 AM

Thx for the feed all.
To answer the question yes I can rap.
But I prefer to use more metaphor and complex thoughts. So to be classified as a "rapper"
isn't the correct comparison
Remember RAP = Retards Attempting Poetry!!
I try to blend them both together. (Poetry+Rap)
Stuff with a lot of meaning, visuals and substance.

Rocheal
Junior Member

since 2009-03-15

Posts 25

5 posted 2009-05-08 08:46 PM

Neat read!! Thanks for pointing me over here to read this.

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