It feels like four o'clock

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Dark Poetry #5

It feels like four o'clock

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2009-02-24 11:05 PM

The title is what it is 'cause i can't think of anything else..and to me it does really feel like four instead of ten..so yeah..:

Dark, cool water;
seeping through the cracks.
Gasping for one tiny breath,
not looking back.

Ice cold oxygen,
shooting through my veins.
Nothing's more adictive
than inflicting your own pain.

What's causing this madness?
Is it fear and doubt?

If there's one thing I know,
I have to get out.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-02-24 11:37 PM

what's more addictive is tattoos

I hope you aren't hurting yourself...
there are better choices, and other things you could do instead.

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

2 posted 2009-02-25 08:07 AM

Sometimes the hour seems later and the night seems darker than it really is.

But as long as you have your friends to support you it will never strike midnight.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2009-02-28 09:37 PM

EMMI!!!...

JESS DOES MISS YOU!!... Loved this..so true..

Great write
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