Dark Poetry #5 |
Cursed |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
This pen can only recall tragedy And etch every word in red As an expression of pain infliction To myself as my veins are bled. Eyes that observe a corrugated world, A hand that copies, not creates Endless dark and mirror of my black soul, Reflections of a sphere of hate. Sublime seraphic light that could have saved Lies forgotten in shallow earth, Another verse to the same bitter song Sung to the tragic poets dearth. |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
"A hand that copies, not creates" Maybe I'm dark at heart, but I loved this, rhyme scheme and all. |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
"This pen can only recall tragedy And etch every word in red As an expression of pain infliction To myself as my veins are bled." Nice man. I like the variation you have in this stanza. - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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