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Consequences of Toying With Demons
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Consequences of Toying With Demons |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Punctuation is all over the place I think. This needed life so it's unedited for now. Hello? Is this you? I'm too far down and right now your light blinds. Something in your eyes makes a craving to tear into the covering material you wear. This cheap soft pleather will only enrage me with its lack of strength and the reminiscence of copycat fantasies. So I smile sarcastic challenging changeling bringing disorder to your perfectly practiced subtlety. I am not one of weak casually standing in line. I step forward right into your anger, that slightly controlled voice through teeth when "had enough" starts to shroud reason, and dare you to stop the emerging monster that wants to feast until your careful persona gives with the accompanying sound of ripping. I'll unzip skins mercilessly until you show me without words what you are really after.
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Read through this, Jenn, and am in a time press at the moment but want to say I love your title....and the fact you smile before you bite. All *good demons do, right? There is a visible two-fold need here to me A will to punish, and an accompanying need to be punished for it. Trying my hardest to imagine the outfit you wear to bring forth both those aspects at once? Michael |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Micheal, Thank you. I'm glad the title grabbed attention. Demons. Of course they smile. Don't you smile before you feast?  The need to punish comes from someone holding back as if I'm not important enough to "stand out" to. There isn't a need to be punished. I wouldn't want punishment for wanting someone to open up. If they claim that I'm different and more important to them, I expect to be treated better as far as them "being real". The outfit worn is stubbornness. Not usually pretty depending on how far I'm willing to push to know what I wish to know.
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I'm smiling now... you wear your feisty well. Michael |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Michael, Thank you. I do try. 
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