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dq_simone
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since 2006-08-22
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0 posted 2009-02-16 08:37 PM


Perhaps it’s ok to be an uncolor,
to be gray in a world of black and white;
Sort of unambitious;
Ambiguous;
Maybe even a little aloof.

Like him, when you asked if he loved you,
and before he said no,
when in those moments between,
you learned all the important lessons.


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SlowlyFallAway
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1 posted 2009-02-17 01:38 PM


This was great.
"When in those moments between;
You learned all the important lessons"
I loved that line.

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2 posted 2009-04-17 02:18 PM


"Like him, when you asked if he loved you,
and before he said no,
when in those moments between,
you learned all the important lessons."

Good stuff! More please!

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