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Dark Poetry #5

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Vagabondinmyownmind
Junior Member
Posts 22

0 posted 2016-09-20 10:19 AM

Empty Hands
Hold tightly to love
Run
Blinding visions in your eyes

Diamonds on the water
Trees in the distance
Peace
gently caresses your face

Scream out
Lungs are empty
Disgust
fibers of your body

Chance meeting
In over your head
Jesus
Crucified for your sin

Blood on your hands
Numbers limit your memory
Still
Animal of Hate

Drum Beats
Rhythms of rain
Heart
Cracked into pieces

Tears of Joy
Stain your cheek
Reincarnate
Death Calls You

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

1 posted 2016-09-24 04:40 PM

Personal attack removed

This is not the first such attack on other Members of pipTalk, nor even the most egregious. Poster suspended for one month.

Ron

[This message has been edited by Ron (09-25-2016 04:26 AM).]

Vagabondinmyownmind
Junior Member
Posts 22

2 posted 2016-09-26 10:13 AM

Although it was a personal attack, i was ok with it. My poems are meant to evoke emotion in others like they do for me and apparently, i evoked some emotion in this individual!

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2019-01-02 08:28 PM

It is well to define our feelings and use words to express them rather than action at times.

I liked this poetry of yours.

...just bein' Bluesy

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