Open Poetry #43 |
Something Found |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Rain, And something found Between drops Against Earth and skin and both the Ground and I belong to This moment….fully given and Received in an act of grace Known holy and ancient to Us all. Something found and once Lost to time and time Again. And now…this moment of Between - Falls against Me. And I remember briefly what the Ground has always known. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sensations soak into the consciousness,leaving lasting impression on the soul. Superb! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
oh yes..so intimately expressed...none is closer than than this... ~ARH(The Lady In Red) |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You are on a true "high" of inspiration, dear Eric! Absolutely gorgeous in its display of deep awareness of the effects of love. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Life awareness is very vivid in this piece and I liked the way the whole thing just flowed so smoothly. It reads even better when read aloud. |
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MsMelissaMae Junior Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 26Indianola, Iowa |
What a brilliant read! |
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