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Open Poetry #43
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rachaelfuchsberger
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0 posted 2008-08-23 02:01 PM

Words in earnest,
With flowers burst,
And make so sweet,
A love that's curst.

Beauty and beholders,
Blind love on shoulders,
With words they meet,
And cross all borders.

These words are shining,
These thoughts grinding,
In love's design they greet,
These lovers' lives entwining.

Arana Darkwolf
© Copyright 2008 Rachael Fuchsberger - All Rights Reserved
marcel
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1 posted 2008-08-26 08:22 PM

nice flow.
hiddenIntheDark
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2 posted 2008-08-27 04:10 AM

nice, I really like it!!
rachaelfuchsberger
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3 posted 2008-08-30 02:24 PM

Thank you. I am glad to have brightened someone's day.

Arana Darkwolf
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