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still seeing the intimate sounds of you
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still seeing the intimate sounds of you |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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still seeing the intimate sounds of you images of you still play in my ears, i hear your whispers and feel heat from your breath and spoken desire it’s a beautiful song that i still see your voice flits and flirts behind my eyelids and i wrap around it, memory dancing we compose an artistic opera voices harmonize; you sing the low notes and i, well i soar high above your song touching vibrant colors of the music i see you as beauty wells around me and images of you play in my ears --- Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, you do a lovely concert in your thoughts, it is a pleasure to listen to your night songs here |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, Alison, this is so touching and so beautiful. It can only be about you and Cade. I stopped to listen to your duet and I didn't want it to end, so I had to read your exquisite poem a couple more times. You are extremely gifted, sensitive and a wonderful, wonderful person. I am honoured to be counted amongst your many, many friends. - Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very lovely and touching tribute, Alison. Ida |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
An exquisite aria Ali... so moving. Thank you for this. Lynda |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Music "is" romance as romance (when right) "is" music and you portray that quite well. A pleasure to read you. |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Wonderfull write. Denis. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Alison that is a wonderful write Much enjoyed, love Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Thank you for taking the time to stop and listen. It makes me smile when you do. A - -Owl, Thank you, sweet one. I am glad that you listened and enjoyed. This one is actually not about Cade - his music is softer in my ears. Love, Alison - Thank you, Ida. It's always nice to see that you have stopped by to read one of my poems. Alison - Thank you, Lynda, for being gracious enough to take the time to comment. Alison - Mark, Thank you so much. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Alison - Denis, Thank you lots. Alison - Lindsay, Thank you. Your opinion means a great deal to me. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a heart touching tune you created, dear Alison! Simply beautiful! Love and hugs. Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sadly, there are many who have never experienced the joy of a harmonic song of love such as this. May yours sing on forever in your beautiful heart, mind, and soul. Love and hugs, Linda xo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Alison - Your title caught my eye and I've been waiting and waiting for a chance to read and appreciate. I just knew it would be beautiful and I wasn't disappointed. Thank you! Love Helen |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Alison, thanks for explaining that this one wasn't about Cade. I love how you explain the difference in the literal and metaphorical music. Both kinds are exquisite. I read this again, and then out of greed, again - especially for the music and very especially those clear soprano notes of skylark perfection. - Owl |
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