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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
Read me the pages unknown fill me with your love hug me forever |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Dark Star, This is a good idea. I used to read to my kids a lot when they were little. It was good for them. Love Bobby |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awww...  I really like this |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My take on this is different than that above; I see a person who is totally open, not "hard to read"; and wants to be loved in and for themselves. While Robert's idea is correct on reading to children, I do not personally see a child in this poem; however, I see a person in need of proper attention and consideration. Dark Star, you wrote a poem worthy of consideration, connection, and communication. To do so many things with so few words in very few lines is a remarkable talent! |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Enjoyed this one. |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
sir...dark star .... http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/7637/rose1rd9.png thank you it's very nice poem |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Nice invitation! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
Robert, this wasn't talking about childern, but i guess it could be taken different ways..  |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
Sunshine and everyone else - thnxs |
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