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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Good God Look at that Busy spider Just who or what This summer night Is it trying to catch . |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
John, I love this one. A |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
perhaps his vaulted ambition is to snag the moon?! applause for this 'penning'! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
He knows his purpose in life! Free John from mosquitos!! Spiders, spiderweb ... a close look will unveil the incredible ways of nature and make us wonder ... and that is quite a deed: to make humans wonder! You wonder beautifully! Love, Margherita  |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Great write here, I'm am inspired, Thank you sir. Regards, OLIAS |
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FastForward Member
since 2008-06-29
Posts 66 |
Oh how I love to see a spider at work on her web. I said "her web". does that make me a sexist? Enjoyed this! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
My spider poems usually just go, "SPLAT!" But that's me. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: yes It caught you |
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