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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Some storms pass Sudden – Belonging only to the Moment of their Giving. And some linger…as if touching two Points of stillness and raining Motion in between. We are at once both sudden and Lingering…a flash of desire Held long against the Flesh. We are storms...raining holy for Each other. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*goodness* how do you do this? so many sighs....  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now those are my kinda storms! ~ Weathering them in the arms of my beloved!  Let it rain! Let it rain! Let it rain! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Regenerating storms, powerful and soothing at once. Amazingly intense.  Margherita |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
*clap* *clap* Enjoyed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me feel like a storm |
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scoff Member
since 2008-07-04
Posts 71Georgia |
I like how you convey your message in a minimum of words. The paucity only lends to each poem's appeal. Really wonderful writing. |
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FastForward Member
since 2008-06-29
Posts 66 |
Whew! Bring on the storm! This is hot. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Points of stillness and raining Motion in between. We are at once both sudden and Lingering…a flash of desire ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I love how you write, and the feeling within. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Blessed. |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Oh my.... I've always liked storms, now I think I'll desire them! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
storms are so beautiful and so dangerous.. very enjoyable write. yann |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Hot thought with a cool expression. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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