Open Poetry #43 |
Give Yourself |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
In its Sweep – The wind strips everything to the Bareness of the soul. Give yourself to every Breeze. |
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Danny Cobb Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 74 |
an interesting an visually seductive poem. I like tyhe imagry you used. Danny |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
beautiful breeze |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wow....brings back many a memory! ~~**~~ |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Wow - i might have to save this one to read it over and over, because so far, every time, I've read it (3 thus far), I've thought of something different! Cool one! |
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RC Langill Member
since 2008-03-09
Posts 104 |
The wind in your words reveals the power of the zephyr. Thank you for making us pause and feel it. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So so beautiful! Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
ery beautiful and poetic, this is a great use of winds. yann |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it!! M |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I love to feel the breeze~ |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
That's actually a scarey thought. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful. |
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