Open Poetry #43 |
Bones Moves On |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Skinny little skin and bones Bones out on the ball yard never found the need to moan and cry about his position in life, and how he was used at home, or on the street. He accepted it all without mention, and moved on. There was nothing he could do about it anyway. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You stir compassion and love with this tribute to little Bones, who had such a tough life, but maybe he knew instinctively the mission he was assigned, who knows. Thank you, dear Bobby, for always touching our hearts. Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, For the kind words on this effort. The tough, hard life prepares a better place for a kid like Bones. That's the way it works. Love Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I am very sure that Bones had had a very important mission to accomplish and in touching all of your readers it would seem that he accomplished it. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, For the kind words on this. I think everyone has a mission in life, and they all just do it. Bobby |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Bobby, I agree with all you and everyone said. Unfortunately not everyone's mission is a good one. For example, my boss is in construction, but his mission is destruction - of everyone with whom he comes into contact. However, our clash comes because I won't allow him to destroy me. I am going to resign as soon as I have found another job. However, missing his four dogs (and even more, their missing me) will break my heart, but Bones teaches me that I can manage, even the latter - wow Bones, I am going to need your help with that. - Owl |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sometimes I hate these poems. I think sometimes we have to hate these poems. A |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear OwlSA, Don't be rash about quitting your job. Always think those things over very carefully. Love Bobby and Bones |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, Don't hate anything Hon. There's no money in it. Love Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bobby, It's just a passing feeling when I read some of your poems. I hate child abuse and I hate children suffering. That's a hate that I would never want to profit from. Your poetry instills a deep feeling in me - that is why I think it is so good. Alison |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, That's a good policy Hon. I'm glad my poems work for you in that way. Love Bobby |
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