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Cries Amidst the Peaks
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Cries Amidst the Peaks |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
We dream of meadows, fragrant and sun-soaked, Where rainbow carpet welcomes our stay — And there we rest, embraced and foliage-cloaked In shade our lips do dance and fingers play. ‘Tis love that draws two hearts to beat in phase And passion surging within heaving breast Bursts in crimson sea, surging and ablaze, No call we have for pause nor needless rest. An evening draws near; a cooling breeze chills The superheated breath, and hushed caress Of whispered words grows strong among the hills — Till we in cry our love for each profess. We dream of meadows, one the other seeks, And our cries still echo amidst the peaks. CG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
CG, what a treat to read another of your love poems so soon! I thought that I was going to have to wait for another eternity! "Of whispered words grows strong among the hills — Till we in cry our love for each profess." My, oh, my, you surely bring the sighs from this fellow Canadian! And who says Canadian's aren't romantic?!?  A pleasure to read ~ and experience!  EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, the echoes must have been powerful in the night! Enjoyed this passionate, beautiful write very much! I love such romantic meadows. Love, Margherita  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
How many stories of love do you think have been written over the course of the past 1000 years or so? enjoyed, Magnus |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Wow! This is exceptional! |
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