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Spider-Webbed Memory |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Spider-Webbed Memory ~*Marge Tindal*~  Do not look into the dark shadows for there you just might find a spider-webbed memory that binds you,holds you messing with your mind~ The struggle of complete release comes hard, but must be found pull, struggle, free yourself from the past ... the past that holds you bound~ Flinching from the cinching cocooned in the webbed recall fling it off ... release it release it all~ Free now are you from that which held you bound fly in total freedom wings are now found fly high ... fly far above that which held you bound~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-11-2008 09:30 AM).] |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a brave inspiring piece, Marge. The analogy is perfect. May your health be restored. God bless, Rae |
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Danny Cobb Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 74 |
it appears Marge, that we were on the same or similar poetic wavelenght in our writings today--yet, yours apears to be so much more exquisite and elegant of thought. but it is neat that we independently could find some common ground of thought and theme! ((Smiles)) danny cobb |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yanno? You could be a doctor! I'm smiling here, because mine told me that I needed to "put the past down so I can embrace the future." He's such a lovely man. Married though--but you two would have made quite a pair! *laughing* love you Marge!  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
exactly  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
So true are these words.... I have one of those little critters in my mailbox.... and in my mind ... of course... thanx MT |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is just so good & probably describes some part of all lives. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Marge, This is well done and good advice for flies. Try to see the web from the point of view of the spider. Love Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
The struggle of complete release comes hard, but must be found pull, stuggle, free yourself from the past ... the past that holds you bound~ very true words dear Marge, we should all look forward and embrace the future and definately not look back in anger. Very well written. love Lindsay |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
such hope found in the tangles we call "life"...wonderfully expressed and visioned. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
reminded me Halloween's on it's way and I have to get my trustry kid 'attack' spiders whipped in to shape. Most were killed last year by kids that wwere smarter than they... Gonna have to get out my new bionic one's this year..... Enjoyed the write marge --- a laugh, a hint of nostalgia and good times to come. j. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wonderful writing, Marge. May we all fly free. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very wise advice in wonderfully expressed poetry, dear Marge. Flying with you in pure heights, feeling light, unburdened by the past events. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Verbena Member
since 2005-10-17
Posts 196Australia |
Dear Marge This is so different from other poems you have posted and I thoroughly enjoyed this one! We all spin our own webs in life........as long as we are not caught up in them! Love Elizabeth (Betty Lou) xo |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Ah my friend, an important step to take! I hope your writing releases all trapped memories and you can move on .... and on .... love you, |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
What a Great image of emotional victory!!! (((Hugs))) Sherry |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Even if my cob webs have cob webs of their own?? Very nice inspiring piece. Lots of positive in it. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Do not look into the dark shadows for there you just might find a spider-webbed memory that binds you,holds you messing with your mind~" Indeed... those webs can be awfully sticky... Time to break out that can of Raid and send those spiders on their way... *smile* Love you, Marge...  "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
May you have full health and courage to fight this! Keep on fighting Marge, You're will to keep on is BIG ARCTIC WIND |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Really an interesting compaprison! You always find inspiration in the most unusual things. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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