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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2008-07-30 03:57 AM

             Erupt The Morn
                        ~*Marge Tindal*~

       Having been too long,
               swallowed by the ebon of night
         it leaves me gulping for the light
            of the summer sun in rupture
                 over meadows of delight~

           Painted summer florals
         will erupt across the lawn
      I am close ...
             oh, so close
         to the calm onset of dawn~

            Lay me down in verdant clover
        turn my easy heart quite over
      Warming showers of refreshing spray
             saturate the on-come of day~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-07-30 04:01 AM

Marge,

This is a morning pleasure. Well, it's midnight here. I am staying up as we are in major flood warnings here. I have been going out and putting up lawn furniture, garden pumps and stuff in the pouring down rain. I love seeing the morn erupt in your world.

Thank you for making me smile as I sip my coffee on a break.

A

Verbena
Member

since 2005-10-17

Posts 196
Australia

2 posted 2008-07-30 05:05 AM

Dear Marge

It was so good to read your poetry again! A lovely poem about 'Dawn-of-Day'! I pray you are well on the road to recovery!

Love Elizabeth (Betty Lou) xo

Betty
Senior Member

since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

3 posted 2008-07-30 08:55 AM

Beautiful

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2008-07-30 09:08 AM

Lovely as always, Marge. I hope you are on the road to good health.

M

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-07-30 11:25 AM

Well first off-- Good Morning !

and Beautiful poem you have written for it

ARCTIC WIND

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2008-08-17 04:32 PM

Dear Marge:

Lovely poem and so enjoyable to read. Thanks for posting it.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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