Open Poetry #43 |
Among them (For the dandelions) |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I sit among them in the spring in their caravan upon the newborn green their tiny cloudlike ivory rings beneath the grander scheme (and feet that tread upon them) as they wait (we wait) for someone to find the many gifts we offer [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-05-2008 06:58 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hmmm... dandelions? ? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Is this a 'Goddess Riddle'? Are they/you ~ dandelions gone to seed? Hmm. Perhaps I best go back and ponder this a bit more. Whatever they/you are ~ they're/you're lovely! Linda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
their tiny cloudlike ivory rings ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm thinking, I'm thinking....and I'm gonna hurt my head if you keep me in suspense much longer. This was pretty in all it's mysterious fanfaire. |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Who doesn't love a little mystery to go with the morning coffee! well done! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Mysterious Indeed!-- But if this is intended to be a little Riddle. I LOVE to try and solve them or find the hidden messages ARCTIC WIND |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no riddle at all intended thanks for reading me kids |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is why I thought "dandelions"... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky you are amazing.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks guys and dollars |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Loving the picture you've painted here... simply beautiful, Michele... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Makes me want to sit with you ... Awesome! Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
No riddle, I've been in this place Watching and waiting Protecting, debating The opening of ivory rings, A puff of destiny, and new yellow faces Their place in the crowd. I loved this one Keeper |
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