eyes of diamond and pretty as a fire lit room

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Open Poetry #43

eyes of diamond and pretty as a fire lit room

gdcod2player
Member

since 2008-07-26

Posts 117

0 posted 2008-07-31 09:19 PM

The day you left me
I felt alone
I guess that what my soul should feel like
When everybody seems to turn on you at the same time
To me it’s something that comes along
With everyone you meet
The songs you hear
Make you feel sorry for yourself
Is it possible?
To show her the song of my heart?
You make the sun shine through
Diamond eyed and pretty as a fire lit room
You are the girl I see with everyone
I mean you have friend so what difference does it make
If I try to come close and take you away
I try to make a friendship
But you keep turning the corner
I can’t take
The girl has left me with nothing to say
Left me with a empty heart its clear
My love for her is something
Something to talk about
With every face
Nobody could care but the love is just pulling away

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

1 posted 2008-08-01 08:02 AM

i can feel the tension and sadness in this touching piece

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