Open Poetry #43 |
hyatt with walnut butter |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you asked me why I searched you out after so long that you had hidden under the long skirt of your busy gown but you didn't look at my eyes this time more you looked down at your shoes and drew lovers in the sand accidentally but erased them quickly when you noticed how your leg looked posed that way and how my smile fit it better than his I don't know if you heard me speak as I mentioned my reasons for wanting but I know you knew the answer already as it was written on your own name tag _______________ daark |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Mr. Mosey man, you are too much for me. This was very cool, and I loved that catchy title of yours as well. Bet you'd be a real hit at the reservation desk! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms bluezy. If you had reservations would you come anyway? Thanks babe |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Always a pleasure to read! ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks a/w. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, Damn, I love your poetry. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms ali-san...can you say dam in a drought? thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: What a hiding place!! Thank you for the smiles! All of your poems always bring special poetic morsels to savor. You are incredibly good! Did you make up your mind yet regarding publishing? You really should! Love, margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..thanks babe, you smile me |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ooh laa.... (have to start practising my french... only 20 more sleeps!) Mr Daark...I'm going to have to print some of your poetry out to keep me company while I'm away! love this offering from you ... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
when I finally get to that hotel will ya help me carry my bags to my room, so I don't get lost?? Loved this one darkdaddy. Purrrfect |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b....thanks babe...and I hope you enjoy your trip...you can practice on me if you wish...grin _________________ ms gs, thank you Donna...you smile me |
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