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Of Two Hearts
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Of Two Hearts |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Of Two Hearts The view magnificent, the woman significent. I liked the way the winds blew her hair all over the Pali Lookout, the winds so strong I pulled her close to me; close enought to desire her sensually, tight enough to share our moments of intimacy. Closer and closer, tighter and tighter, a man and a woman wishing to share the feelings that lived there within the caress of two hearts. JamesLee 27July 2008 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
And "I liked the way" you wrote this! It near stopped me from breathing! Now that is what I'd call being close!  Linda |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Oh yes, what a beautiful piece of writing. And having swum in the winds of the Pali many times it becomes more than magic for me. I miss my island :/ ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
You are so lucky my friend. You live in paradise and you got the girl!! Great write. |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
it is beautifully done. i like the way it ends |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a particularly fine ending! applause! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes good one James, you always seem to have great luck with those beautiful girls over there in Hawaii. I'll bet all those red blooded males on PIP envy you for sure. Nice write. Lindsay |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very nice |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
A lovely tribute to love |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds like the perfect moment to me and as always, you pen romance on both sides so well. Enjoyed. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
lovely James! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A lovely crescendo of emotions, dear James! Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I like the way you wrote this. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
JamesMichael - don't know how I missed this one, and glad I was able to read it. Great writing of strong emotions for a lovely woman... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo James, Yes, it is windy up there. This is a lovely poem. Bobby |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a lovely write of an intimate occurrence...nicely done... |
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