Open Poetry #43 |
Kiss Me |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Kiss me to madness Kiss me oh kiss me again Kiss me to shivers Kiss me in sunlight Kiss me in shimmering rain KIss me as night falls Kiss me with soft lips Kiss me with your fingertips Kiss me with your eyes Kiss me oh kiss me Kiss me til time fades away Kiss me one more time |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
The complexities of a kiss are often taken for granted. I see you appreciate this wonderful energy. Thanks, Hal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read of the pleasures of a kiss...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Paula Finn, This poem makes good use of repetition. Love Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paula - kiss me under the moon. Enjoyed this one... BC |
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AAB Member
since 2008-04-10
Posts 99Canada |
oh kisses, they say so much more then words. great write. |
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