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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
In a wistful, wishful moment I dream...of being with you In a field of dancing Sweet Grass A place where antelope play Tomorrow’s minds would meld In yesterday’s bodies While the Indian flute Played tender refrains Knowing each other Wholly, without words, In a time where our entirety Could not be conveyed In even the simplest of terms Fingers would dismay And scintillate the joining While a cascade of emotion Complements the day Yet now you do not know me Our masks are all we share And our souls do only passing In a soft and silent way I would love the feel of you... |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Aww.. this started with such promise until the lack of soul bonding was revealed. What a sweet disappointment. Loved it! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The mind is a glorious imaginitive way of transportion. Like taking a vacation to all the places in our dreams. Wonderfully expressive poem you wrote. Much enjoyed, amusemi~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such beautiful thoughts, almost paradisiac ... Love, margherita  |
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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
your an amazing writer how long have you been writing? i like that is it about love? i think it is im not good analyzer thing person but if you have the chance to ever listen to bruce springsteen listen to the song terry's song its amazing i mean its inspireing |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Thank you for your comments and for reading. gd-I looked up the song you cited and I can say honestly that I avidly avoid anything that even resembles a ship that's sinking, any man from New Jersey/Pennsylvania and anyone named Terry for that matter (but, metaphorically it did give me quite the giggle!) It was just a poem. Been writing for awhile...thanks for your compliments...I hope to see great things from you...I do believe you have a talent. Moving on... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great poem my friend You wrote it well, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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