Open Poetry #43 |
Squinting |
Khe Iem Junior Member
since 2007-10-14
Posts 25 |
SQUINTING By Khe Iem swiveling one’s head rolling one’s feet accidentally confronting but keeping silent while passing through A town of half-breeds (angered) punching the air, lost to the world vast buttocks, thighs and breasts. Wandering crazily, confined. The pounding of loosened throats. East and West. Faces grimacing, squinting |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Khe Iem, This makes no sense to me. Whats-a-matter lamb-chop, you got a problem with us half-breeds? Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (07-25-2008 11:35 AM).] |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Hmm... I almost think I understand this. It helps that I am a half-breed myself. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
While I can't completely comprehend your poem Khe Lem, Your style and syntax was brilliant. JNS |
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Khe Iem Junior Member
since 2007-10-14
Posts 25 |
Sorry for bothering you. KI |
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