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Julroyon |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
 Julroyon Lady of the Moonlight My peasant Princess With your unkempt hair- Still ravishing After all these hard years. Eyes smiling with joy, Humble, Yet proud, Content to help me To work the soil Though it hardens Your once soft hands, But not your heart. Even when those hands Carried our son To his early rest Still, your face beamed And you sang, Just as your image Sings to me Now. What would I do Without you, My forever undiminished Julroyon? You are the reason I still revere The night. This Poem Was Based On This Image By Galen Schlich http://www.galenschlich.com © Julroyon.jpg 2008 ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
This is simply lovely.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Yes! ..."my forever undiminished"... Timeless beauty.  My humble accolades. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is beautiful and inspired my friend. Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Garapan, this is a very nice 'word portrait' from a photo inspiration. |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
I truly believed you could have loved her. Your light shines through this poem, even as Emerson said it would. Lynda |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Thank you all, sincerely. I am encouraged by all of your words! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Garapan that is a very tender, poignant poem, a little sad but so well written. Thanks for sharing. Lindsay |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Fanky Mr. Lindsay! I am pleased that you enjoyed Julroyon's company! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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apes531 Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 35 |
that was nicely written (chcek out my poems and tell me what you think) |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
ty apes. I have been viewing and will continue to view your poetry! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely, well written poem, Garapan. Ida |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
ty ida you are a gracious friend to me and to this club! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Possibly my favourite of all your poems that I have read, Brett. I like the way you climb into the head of another - keep doing so, so that you can continue to develop it to the benefit of all around you. - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Also, my favourite photo of all those you have written on. She creates a Mona Lisa mood. - Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You word-paint beautifully, dear Brett. Love, Margherita |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Thank you Owl and LAdy M, two very qualified voices. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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