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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
In the days of then... The tears of a girl Keeping lonely company And a melody of song Flowing in unity. So Alone. The tune permeates A scent of time. Dated Polo cologne And a moonlight dance In a place called "Pasture." Music glittered stars From car speakers, Hose wet from the grass. A song that, now, In aged repose, Brings a knowing smile. Despite romance, And surety of youth, He was not 'the love'... My credit's not Bad...I'm just protecting myself from identity theft! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This made me smile with the innuendo in such verisimilitude. Good work! Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Great word...I even had to look it up!!! Actually this was very real. He is now a happily married family man to my beloved best friend. I stood up for them at the wedding. Just heard the melody and it brought back the memory....and the impetuousness of youth.  Thank you for reading Eric. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Excellent poem Just a hint of love but not to keep Like it it's very good, Well penned |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sorry I wasn't trying to take away from the truthfullness of your work....It just came across to me that way... By the way......I just LOVE! your signature. LOL! Take care Eric |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Thank you Annie. Eric....absolutely no offense taken. I have a pretty thick shell in any case. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so evocative atmosphere, could almost hear the music, sensitive and well written. yann |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
amusemi - memories are good at times, when reading this writing I could feel your pen... BC |
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