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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-12-19 02:15 PM


Like any kid
out working the hoods
mean streets,
Bones knows exactly
who’s important.  

For Bones,
Bones comes in
number one.  

After Bones is taken care of,
then maybe,
and only maybe,
will Bones think about doing
something for someone else.

I know you understand.

Bobby


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SEA
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1 posted 2008-12-19 03:17 PM


I do understand that.
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2 posted 2008-12-19 03:40 PM


Bobby - understand exactly...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-12-19 06:05 PM


Thanks dear SEA,

I'm pleased that you know where Bones is coming from in this poem.

Thanks for the kind words.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-12-19 06:06 PM


Thanks Bill,

I kinda thought that you would understand Bones thinking in this poem.

Thanks for the kind words.

Bobby

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5 posted 2008-12-19 07:07 PM


Somebody has to look after Bones.
                          Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-12-19 07:41 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

What you say is very true.  

Bones is very much alone in this world.

Love Bobby

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7 posted 2008-12-26 11:36 PM


Yep, you know I do.

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ethome
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8 posted 2008-12-26 11:46 PM


Pecking order of the fittest Bones is the reality.

Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2008-12-27 07:52 AM


Thanks dear Alison,

I'm very glad you understand.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2008-12-27 07:54 AM


Thanks Eric,

Yes, Bones knows what's what, and who's who.

Bobby

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11 posted 2008-12-27 01:34 PM


You know well Bobby, everyone does the same thing but some are very cunning and selfish, thank you for the poem.

yann

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2008-12-27 02:51 PM


Thanks Yann,

As you may have guessed, Bones is not selfish at all, andd he should be more cunning perhaps.

Bobby

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