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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-12-24 09:02 PM


Rain nor Snow

Today although
its raining
she and I enjoy
how gently the rain
deposits raindrops
upon our cheeks.
In the grace of
the moment our lips
now tenderly meet.

We want each other badly
neither rain nor snow
nor distances have
kept us apart.
We shall not live
without these feelings,
we love the way love
warms our hearts.

JamesLee
24December
2008





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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2008-12-24 09:45 PM


sweet
KandyGrl511
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since 2008-11-30
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2 posted 2008-12-24 10:08 PM


awesome~!?!~
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2008-12-25 01:23 AM


we love the way love
warms our hearts.
Beutifully and simply put James....
Loveley romantic piece!

Eric

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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4 posted 2008-12-26 07:06 PM


Thank you 1slicklady, Kandy and ethome for the wonderful responses...James
steavenr
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5 posted 2008-12-28 08:17 PM


this is a nice soft romantic write...so enjoyed...really needs to go back to the top
2islander2
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by the sea
6 posted 2008-12-29 01:28 AM


the essential is love. Thank you for the poem.

yann

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