Open Poetry #43 |
of wine and miracles |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
None but these: the five of them walking past the church as if it held no light within for them. Heads bowed in the face of wind blowing much too mightily freed of all emotion's greed enticing them to whim of need as they counted fervantly beads and Mary's lack of seed as if it was her saving grace and perhaps it was. * * * with a wink and a nod *chuckle* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Maybe it is...*smile* I know it makes me happy. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Let's open that wine and deal with the maybe it was......Good write my dear talented lady! Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - you're awesome... BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ty, my own lil trinity. I should explain--that wink and nod wasn't amusement nor jest at anyone's religious beliefs--I had simply had so much wine I didn't remember writing this. As I recited it on the phone to a pip-friend, I was told it was perfect iambic pentameter too. *shrugging helplessly* It's not written on the page that way, though. Anyhow, I told my friend I had no idea what I meant when I wrote it--so consider this a "stream of unconscious" offering. No offense intended. *peace* |
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