Open Poetry #43 |
Seeds |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Seeds planning a garden winter seeds hunting flowers playing with hues blank paper tags what will belong where blues the edge of me red middle anger but in the shade bleeding hearts |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Helen, This is a nice garden poem. Of course, I don't like gardens. Gardens bring back bad memories. Love Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - one red rose planted would be appreciated... BC |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hard to know where they will end up but the idea will come to life when they blossom. Forget the blues line it will be wonderful then!! I can see it now. Very enjoyable little excursion you take us on here..... Eric |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'll be a bench. Y'want me to be a bench? I mean, I'm always here anyway. You do grow the most lovely poems. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
love the form this takes...it's as beautiful as the words you've crafted |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Interesting garden you planted, Helen. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love this new one that has grown! ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Helen It sounds a nice combination but if red represents anger don't plant it, for life is too precious to be angry. Happy Christmas Helen. Lindsay |
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