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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2008-12-21 03:17 AM


sigh

Make your mistakes, and I will still be here for you.

love,

mom

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (12-21-2008 07:27 PM).]

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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2008-12-21 05:24 AM


very sensitive work, a lot of emotions well described.

yann

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-12-21 05:45 AM


Oh, beautiful,Karen, she says tearfully, wishing her own daughter were home, in every sense of the word, "home" . . .

- Owl

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2008-12-21 03:46 PM


OH Diana, how great it is to see you!

and yann, I really need to start returning the favor of reading. (so many poets, and I've got a bad chair.)

Musta wore it out.

Now.

Could SOMEBODY with God-like Pip powers, please resize this photo to a more acceptable size. (I thought photobucket had done that but I guess not.)

Sheesh.

and thanks.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-12-23 06:58 PM


This is sad~
K, this is solid work here

MERRY CHRISTMAS!


ARCTIC WIND

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2008-12-23 07:09 PM


The poem was deleted A.W.
Toerag
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Ala bam a
6 posted 2008-12-24 07:53 AM


sad...but know the feeling gal.....

I've made mistakes?...can I come over?

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2008-12-24 08:47 AM


I wish you would lovie...

and folks, she's home.

I wrote her an eight page "letter".

?

Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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Houston
8 posted 2008-12-24 10:06 AM


OHHHH! How do you do that?? I wanna do that.. I just can't seem to let go! I hate this phrase.... "I'm an adult mom!"

Sigh* Help me Karen!!!

steavenr
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9 posted 2008-12-28 08:08 PM


now, this is the message the world needs now...remarkable...standing on a hilltop with my cola raised to the sky in tribute to excellence
nourzihane
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Algeria
10 posted 2009-01-07 05:01 AM


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passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2009-01-07 11:18 AM


dang...don't I feel it!
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