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Markus
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0 posted 2008-12-20 01:39 PM



I am terrified by this path I walk,
knowing behind me eternity,
in front of me forever, a circle.

I have come to this point in the path,
the point I have come to many times before,
but today I stand here thinking about you.

You are in my past, this I know from little
glimpses of the future

And I know to be with you again,
I have to move forward,
to cross the barrier.

I want to be with you again,
in my past, where that moment of love
was forever.

I want to cross the threshold with you again,
because I still love your soul.

I am moving forward in time, to be
with you again in my past,

I need that moment of embrace with you,
that is the moment of Everlast.

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with you
1 posted 2008-12-20 01:51 PM


"I want to be with you again,
in my past, where that moment of love
was forever."

I understand this well

steavenr
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2 posted 2008-12-20 09:34 PM


this is a very moving theme in a very stirring write...loved this especially:

"I am moving forward in time, to be
with you again in my past,

I need that moment of embrace with you,
that is the moment of Everlast"

oh, and lest I forget...
Welcome to PiP

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3 posted 2008-12-21 05:25 AM


enjoyed it.

yann

Markus
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4 posted 2008-12-22 04:11 PM


thank you for your kind words
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5 posted 2008-12-23 01:26 AM


Markus~

'I want to be with you again,
in my past, where that moment of love
was forever.

I want to cross the threshold with you again,
because I still love your soul.'


Oh my, oh my ... how very lovely is this~
VERY !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Markus
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6 posted 2008-12-26 12:08 PM




thanks for making me feel like a rock star for but a fleeting moment in time merry xmas and happy new year

warmest regards to every one

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