Open Poetry #43 |
everywhere everything |
sams New Member
since 2008-12-25
Posts 1 |
I see you everywhere, yet you’re nowhere Looking for you while you’re standing there At high skies swimming on wings of air Atop far plants beacons from holy flare Strands from clouds extended your hair Everything is you yet none would compare Constantly trying to climb a missing stair All failed to convey even a genuine tear Talking to you once; is all I do really care To let you know what I am; truly I swear Sole chance pleading to tell the facts bare Grievous story subsists within behind glare To grasp the complexity just sit on my chair From pure heart yours should never scare Sacred love from someone that doesn’t err Caring human your heart never to beware I only need you and I am in total despair Hopeless love is an endless pain to bear Desire is never a factor in great love affair Could only grow when earth becomes a lair Based solely on admiring traits surely rare Every move would show an exceptional flair Your affable world was only hoping to share Craving notion to share an infinite green pear Breaking an innocent heart was indeed unfair What went through a mind; fully I am aware Not a matter of bold emotions or trying to dare Still never shy and at whole world would stare But it’s a private matter and none has an affair I love you; mighty word longing always to blare On acclaimed feast of love and at every square Foundation for a structure; time can never wear Is it much to mend a heart and human soul repair? Sincerely asking a second thought; never to snare After all not a doubt that we mirror a perfect pair. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
One can sense the sorrow and aching plea in this.... Welcome, welcome to PIP. Many are away for the holiday, but there are a great many poets...all with beautiful hearts. Great first post...hope to see more. kat |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very complex write, a multi-layered cake frosted with emotion. Welcome to Pips! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry. You'll find this to be a wonderful home within your home. We have lots of great poets here who are happy to share with you. This is a nice entree - We're looking forward to more. Check your email for a special treat - and Happy Holidays.. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Oh this is lovely i particularly liked this stanza Breaking an innocent heart was indeed unfair What went through a mind; fully I am aware Not a matter of bold emotions or trying to dare Still never shy and at whole world would stare But it’s a private matter and none has an affair It is my fave, very well penned, Excellently written, You can feel the emotion in it |
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