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Debussy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KKPBtZ0Zzok * * * please hold me yes, just touch my face and if your finger's trembling? It feels like butterflies and lace. I won't mind at all. Touch your lipsink teasing mine bite like this say "wow" and now nuzzle-suckling aching wet endowed with rough tongue's dancing trace of there it is and there it ain't pleasing me to tilt my head with your hand held just beneath... Make love to me I'm whispering: love to me like this: embrace; wishing we were catholic holy water sprinkling every hour, chiming in as the tall belltower sings: love was made to me (a gong) a bell is ringing, singing dawn... Love was made to me - I'm free dancing in the twinkling beneath the moon so prettily making patterns that I trace where your fingers once were tunes making me a music box spindled, Debussy: the grace Clair de Lune...upon my place so silent secret unto me. Love. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now you did it - that was Willow's favorite dance tune but it was good cry anyway I guess. Lovely K, really very lovely. |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Dear serenety God bless your words & your soul my best wishes Nourzihane |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
now right there is romance |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a beautiful read, a beautiful tune, a series o sighs to go with creatively beautiful words like these: "It feels like butterflies and lace." ...to watch them appear in a clip & paste even brings another sigh...now that's good writing...and who doesn't love Debussy...sigh... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Perfect match! You are captivating! "Late" |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Serenity blaze, Thanks for the lovely musical link and poem. Being good Catholic boys, Bones and I love classical and semi-classical music. We get a lot of it at Mass. Love Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
God, I love that Debussy music! Now I'll be humming it in my sleep tonight. What a gorgeous write, lady Serenity! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
what a grand-fine ending... "so silent secret unto me. as I remember Love." ...to an exceptional piece of 'musical' poetry [with such wonderful imagery (I am especially fond of: "like butterflies and lace")] long-sustained applause!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
K, Debussy, “Claire De Lune” is one of my favorites as is, “Prelude to Afternoon of a Faun” try “Consolation” and “Lieberstraum” by Liszt and “Traumerai” by Schuman I think you will like them also h |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks serenity for this very musical and delicate work, I could hear the music and was amazed by your words and rythm of your poem. yann |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This music stirs me to tears. It's truly like the sound of flowers blooming... Oh I wish I could dance... spinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...oh to have such grace! My humble love to all.  |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
Verrry, verrry, lovely and delicate. ("endowed with rough tongue's dancing trace of there it is and there it ain't" and the Clair de Lune part--mighty fine!) "The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling at your signature Calis... thank you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Gave me chills.. the good kind. Love you much... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
With deep admiration for one who has the gift to assemble words so tenderly, words that throb with the heartbeat of love. congratulations on a fine work of art --- art |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Grace? *S* Lady... don't you realize how your words dance, whether your feet follow or not? *S* I couldn't even respond at first... you literally melted me. Bravo! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This is one of my all time favorites.The audio does not work anymore but it does bring you to the page and I was able to chose another rendition. This is really beautiful and not to be missed. latearrival/jo |
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