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Curiosity |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Curiosity you took my breath and put it in a clean glass jar placed the shinny metal lid on tight and arranged it on a shelf with the rest of your collection did you capture me or just the echo of my whisper so much you betray yourself more than you could ever betray me for you are just the motion in emotions |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I belong to a collector too... ((((((((((((((  ))))))))))))))))))))))))call me "Dusty" the back one on the top shelf  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh I LOVE that! The motion in emotions. Hope you don't mind if I use that as a hook for a song.......Sometimes one line says so much. Great writing! Eric |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like everything about this, Helen. I just like the way you write. Ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Fantastic write... stunning ending! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes it is a lovely post Helen, so much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
did you capture me or just the echo of my whisper" Wonderful, just wonderful. And the ending was amazing as well |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
fantastic piece gal...... and, wishing you fantastic "peace" over the holidays... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - this is an excellent write of inner thoughts, and feelings... BC |
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