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A Hopelessly Quixotic Dreamers Song
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A Hopelessly Quixotic Dreamers Song |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Time and distance; wedges driven between two hearts that refuse to be torn apart and I find myself timid each time that you are here but you... you pull me near looking into my soul you allay the fear softly lulling these worries of mine you wrap me in love so divine. Rapturous moments are spent lost in your eyes and for that time you are mine and I am yours with fingertips entwined together once more before the harsh reality closes that door just to find it re-opened when you make your return into these arms that wait to hold you again. © dmsmith 12-17-08 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is lovely Donna  |
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WolfHeart Junior Member
since 2008-12-17
Posts 23Oregon, USA |
Lovely read. You express yourself well and pull the reader into the situation. Love this. "Love the unloveable; they need it most of all." |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
"and for that time you are mine and I am yours with fingertips entwined together once more" Wonderful, just wonderful. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very romantic and well written Gentle. Nice mood set! Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Donna You touch my heart with this one. A |
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