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Open Poetry #43

Night Ink

WolfHeart
Junior Member

since 2008-12-17

Posts 23
Oregon, USA

0 posted 2008-12-17 10:21 PM

Sky streaked by an eager comet,
throwing silver onto the face of
the quiet waves.

Sky a panoply of wonders,
quilted squares lean out of
the way, avoiding the comet's tail.

Deep black shadows hint at
hidden menaces, monsters
and ghoulies galore.

Mysteries of the night gather
to watch the ink of the night
write messages of horror.

"Love the unloveable; they need it most of all."

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-12-17 11:05 PM

a beautifully talented write...certainly welcome to PiP...will be looking for more...

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2008-12-17 11:27 PM

Lovely

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

WolfHeart
Junior Member

since 2008-12-17

Posts 23
Oregon, USA

3 posted 2008-12-18 12:23 PM

Thanks, Steve, for your very kind comment.
I am hoping this will be a good place for me!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2008-12-18 01:04 AM

"Sky streaked by an eager comet,
throwing silver onto the face of
the quiet waves."

great visual!

really enjoyed this

YoungatHeart2
Member

since 2008-12-12

Posts 81

5 posted 2008-12-23 05:23 PM

hidden menaces of the night....real or imaginary.... old childhood night fears that are only hibernating....ready to awaken to take the insomniac captive....the light of day releases the demons until the night falls again.....

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