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poddarku
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0 posted 2008-12-13 12:51 PM



Golden harvests
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The hands, full of corn
pick up the golds and
he lifts them to nostril.
The aroma of fresh
golden harvests comes.
It pervades, fills nerves.
He can ignore those
burrows of pains that
flow down under
each of the corns, bruises.
The droplets of water
reflect million suns.
Impressions of world
are trembling on mirrors
of them; metaphors are
taking shapes of truth.

His small girl is coming
like a gush of liquid life,
with lunch, packed carefully.
He smiles to receive God
as it is.    
            
             © 2008 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar

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© Copyright 2008 poddar kushal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-12-13 03:14 AM


This is beautiful in many ways.

Alison

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Gaia
2 posted 2008-12-13 08:00 AM


I'm putting this in my favorites file.
It flows with the taste of pure golden sweetness. Expertly written, my friend.

amusemi
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3 posted 2008-12-13 09:32 AM


Stunning!
OwlSA
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4 posted 2008-12-13 10:27 AM


Yet again, Kushal, the characters in your poem are so sensitively real, they walk right out of Pip's blue pages into the sunlight.  I know I am in for a treat when I see a poddarku poem "on the menu"!

- Owl

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2008-12-14 09:34 AM


I am pausing a while here with you, dear Ku, and find God permeating your words.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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6 posted 2008-12-14 09:53 AM


You have a talent for writing, your poem moved me.

yann

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