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Open Poetry #43

Moonlit Pouty Lips.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2008-12-11 11:58 PM

you are wrapped
in blankets made from my sweet words
whispered quietly
across midnight park benches
the way inappropriate but wonderful things
are often said in public.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2008-12-12 12:00 PM

This made me smile...wonderful write.

WOOHOO...look the smiley has a Santa hat!!!!!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-12-12 12:09 PM

beautiful depiction of the power of words...nicely done...btw, I misread your title at first...I thought it read 'Moonlit Poultry Lips'...change it from pouty to poultry and it conjures up a different image...oh, well...

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

3 posted 2008-12-12 01:30 AM

Thanks you too...

Poultry huh? CHICKEN LIPS. That will be another poem altogether...

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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