Open Poetry #43 |
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I Walk Alone Tonight |
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philipo New Member
since 2008-12-10
Posts 4 |
I Walk Alone Tonight ---------- I walk alone tonight, by the withered wood. I walk aside deep dark roots, beneath a misty lambent light. A shrewd gloom resides bewildered, within this prodigious place. I walk alone in tenacious winds, through the tall whispering trees. A tall tree cannot tell, but strange knowledge remains. I walk aside abundant mounds, there's shrieking grove abound. I have worn these layers, but the piercing chill prevails. I walk alone tonight, to a cold dark place. [This message has been edited by philipo (12-11-2008 12:27 PM).] |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nicely done! Welcome to Pips. I look forward to more from your pen. |
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philipo New Member
since 2008-12-10
Posts 4 |
Thank you, edited a bit since submission. I've never really done this before, but I have always been told to make use of my writing, a skill I have, so I'm told. I dunno enough of my bragging. Thought it was time I start all the same. Haven't done this since school. Although it would be criticism I seek amongst the praise I don't quite deserve for a first time. ![]() ![]() |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
philipo, That bone cold is hard to warm when it gets cold like that. Welcome and keep on sharing with us. Alison |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
philipo, Welcome, now that you have joined PIP you will not have to walk alone in the cold night. Just write them down and post them, for you have friends here. "late" |
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philipo New Member
since 2008-12-10
Posts 4 |
Made a very big edit there overnight. ![]() |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoy very much your poem, the loneliness is chilly as the woods you cross, it makes me think a lot, very thoughtful and communicant. regards yann |
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philipo New Member
since 2008-12-10
Posts 4 |
thank you. |
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