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Tempest Prelude
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Tempest Prelude |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Tempest Prelude The gentle moonlight window frames a razor-edge waning crescent in evanescent calm, (moored with ragged clouds and caged by silent, gently tumbling galaxies) while a most beguiling winter wind sings its snow-soft serenade before the most divine chaos to come. --- b. e. adams (12/11/20008) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like the sound of a 'snow-soft serenade'. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"before the most divine chaos to come." what a blessed anticipation of such a lovely event...makes me want to wait by the window for the first flake...fantastic write |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"while a most beguiling winter wind sings its snow-soft serenade before the most divine chaos to come" beautiful |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, Yes, that's winter for you. For some reason this brought back memories of light blocked windows covered with a layer of ice. My house must be warmer these days, and that's good. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This poem reminds me of the wind slamming snow into our house during the winter storms. The house would rock as the wind whistled. Beautiful writing, Bruce. A |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Too true! Nicely set in the scene of your descriptions....... Prelude indeed....Esp here in Canada. Eric |
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