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Arius Miura de Galdri
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0 posted 2008-12-09 09:25 AM


I'm not sure how many of you have read my poem/fable "The Sage" (or how many remember it, lol) but this is the second in an ongoing series of fables featuring the Sage character.

"The Dreamer"
Part I

In years gone by, so distant now it seems
A man was plagued by lucid, loathsome dreams
The cause of these, the man could never face
And ever changing were the nightmares’ themes

He dreamt of fire, of brimstone and of pain
He dreamt himself alone and dying in vain
He’d dream of lovers dead and gone away
The dreams, he knew, were driving him insane

When daylight came, he’d wearily awake
And curse these phantoms of his past mistake
Old ghosts, it seemed, would never let him rest
He knew not how much more his mind could take

His waking hours he spent in penance deep
With weary mind, so frail from lack of sleep
Unable was his heart to carry on
And hopelessly, the broken man would weep

AMdG

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amusemi
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2008-12-09 09:37 PM


Enjoyed...
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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2 posted 2008-12-10 02:53 PM


I am so glad to see you writing again, Arius.
I enjoy your stle of wring very much.
                               Ida

Arius Miura de Galdri
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3 posted 2008-12-11 07:54 PM


Thanks, more to come soon!

AMdG

"My candle burns at both ends; it will not last the night; but ah, my foes, and oh, my friends--it gives a lovely light!"  -Edna St. Vincent Millay

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