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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-12-08 08:09 PM

Like the white feather
  in a blizzard
caring only for
the will of the wind…

love...

('thief of hearts;'
    soul destructor;
      eternal mystery)

is a fleeting echo
in the moonlight.

         --- b. e. adams (12/08/2008)

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-12-08 08:46 PM

"Like the white feather
in a blizzard
caring only for
the will of the wind…"

...a beautiful synergy...a beauty-filled write

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-12-08 09:37 PM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

This is well written in proper English. That's always a good thing.

Bobby

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-12-08 11:08 PM

Now, this is a poem about love that I can admire and enjoy, Bruce. Makes sense to me.
Hauntingly beautiful.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-12-09 08:14 AM

Your graceful touch of melancholy always leaves sweet echoes.

eternal mystery yes, but true love lifts the soul and the heart, it does not "take" anything nor "destruct" anything ...

You, the Universalist, you know about the touch of Universal Love that wraps you in its mind boggling arms. Your melancholy stems from the yearning for the Whole, of which we are not always fully aware, but which we remember somehow....

Love,
Margherita

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2008-12-09 11:26 PM

"Like the white feather
in a blizzard"

I wish I'd thought of this. (I'd have chosen metaphor over simile, though, and screwed it up completely.)

I always do. *weak smile*

A moving poem, lovie.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2008-12-13 12:43 PM

Bruce,

I like this a lot. It is beautiful and haunting with wonderful imagary.

Alison

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

7 posted 2008-12-13 12:53 PM

"white feather
in a blizzard
caring only for
the will of the wind"]

Wonderful

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2008-12-13 10:51 AM

Very, very beautiful, Bruce.

- Owl

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